Demeter CapitalLogo Design Contest

update #136

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update #137

Same as the other comments about the letterform mark and pictorial oks

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work on the letterform mark, may be you could use the leaf in the letter C of DC or in between ok, so we can use it as a letterform and remember the pictorial mark too oks,

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Can you use a lighter grey for the bars?

I think is better, may be try a different color (could be green) for "Capital" and see if the green line could be of another color

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I like it, see how it looks with a different tone of green and darker blue and may be use a different color for the bars like the grey, ok

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Hello,

I like the wordmark, on the leaf, make it smaller and may play a little with the "inside" so it looks more like a leaf ok, remember that we need the wordmark, the pictorial/abstract marks and the letter form ok

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I like the leaves on top of the D and the green line, may be a little larger leaves and remember that we need the wordmark, the pictorial/abstract marks and the letter form ok

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same than on the other one, a field and a sky or crops or something like that and remember that we need the wordmark, the pictorial/abstract marks and the letter form ok

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I like the letterform, may be a small space with in the leaf so there is a small white separation from the line of the letters ok, and more leaf like green a little more intense, also for the workmark ok, remember that we need the wordmark, the pictorial/abstract marks and the letter form ok

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may be a larger leaf or a crop would work and a more intense leaf like green ok, remember that we need the workmark, the pictorial/abstract marks and the letter form ok

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may you can use a blue sky instead of black, and mix colors with the wordmark and use a green in one of the two words oks, remember that we need the workmark, the pictorial/abstract marks and the letter form ok