thanks for your feedback. im verry apreciated but the time is over and i cannot do anything more cause im not in the first rank. cause in judging session, only the first rank contestant can do any change i wish i can help you and make you satishfy ., but i am the late contestan here. thanks
You are back up and on center stage, take another stab at it, maybe tone down the color a bit. I am eager to see what else you may have. You certainly have a fresh eye!
#284 and #293 each have good elements. I dont like the red dots in the eye. I prefer the eye in 293 and the orientation looking left. I like the dl in the pupil but I think a variety of combined DL in block style like some of the other logos would be cleaner.
I also think the text and tagline are too edgy, remember I am looking for strikingly different but, elegant and sophisticated. Thanks for your efforts, I am hoping this helps.
Too much color, NO Yellow! GOLD IS OK because it is a softer tone. Also, loose the line under Debby Lynn and maybe no DL in the center of the pupil and less blades on the shutter. Hope this is not too much to ask.
do not worry about the "ask". I've been following more than a hundred contest here. and if I do not win this contest, I thought it was common. because clients prefer a more suitable design. thats Okey:)
The gold is still too yellow but this is much better. I feel the center should be black or empty. Try dropping the background fill out all together and work on just the design so that color is not such a strong influence. Notice the gold and silver tones in the top deigns.