Good design you have going here Jelomimbs! I like #72 the best, let's work with that. Nice design netbook, nice fonts and overall layout.
(the closed netbook #75 and #74 look very slick, but looks more like a bar of soap or something on first impression.)
- Soften the white gradient on the "deal" lettering. It's a bit too harsh for my liking. - I don't have anything else to add, though I do worry about the GREEN netbook and GREEN text below, maybe too much green.
Hi Frychiko. Thanks for the quick feedback. I really apreciated that. Well, here's the new revision specialy for #72. Just make the Netbook colors more brighter so its not too much greeny (i thinks it not a big deal for the notebook color). In another design, revision in "NETBOOKS" colors. I use bright/contrast/vibrant colors to make it more catchy. Ah ya, in another one design, i use the dark grey (like the real netbook colors). Very confused at the begining since in your brief, you're avoid the grey, but not spesific.. light or dark. Hope this make sense. About the "soap" note book, i've also make the revision, but not in this contest. I'll submitted in "Notebooked" contest. As usuall, really apreciated for your next feedback.