I like what you did with underlining "Your Move". No one else has done this. Would like to see the entire slogan in quotes.
As for the rest, can we try some variations with font of my name? Maybe all caps but with larger first letter of first name last name? Some slight depth to the font (3D type of effect?) Also, and I'm not sure how or where in the logo, but maybe some kind of wave/water look to help signify that Michigan is the Great Lake State. Thanks.