OK, looking even better (#25) with the background color. Now, here's what I'm thinking... Can you do something similar but with the state being in the blue color (with Michigan being the Great Lake State, thinking blue for water looks better than the green. Then switch the green and blue in my name. I really like the gradient blue in #23 too.
Is the green of the state in #25 a little darker than "Dave" in the same? If so, I like the darker shade to be used in "Melvin". Maybe use some slight gradient in that as well as the blue in the state and Dave?
I like the slogan in #25 just as it is too.
Thank you.