Hi raymer,
Thanks for being our first submission! I have a few comments. I think the colors need to be a little bit softer - not a lot because we definitely want bright, but maybe just a different tone. Also, the slogan Ride the Wave should be more prominent. And "Expo 2017" should say DATTCO Sales & Service Expo 2017 and should be a little less prominent than the slogan.
And finally, this is a great representation of the example i provided, but I am hoping to see some different renditions with a wave, maybe without surfboards - maybe with other elements of luau that I'm not thinking of.
I'm going to add a photo of the logos we went with for our expo for the last two years - maybe that will help also.
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Thanks for being our first submission! I have a few comments. I think the colors need to be a little bit softer - not a lot because we definitely want bright, but maybe just a different tone. Also, the slogan Ride the Wave should be more prominent. And "Expo 2017" should say DATTCO Sales & Service Expo 2017 and should be a little less prominent than the slogan.
And finally, this is a great representation of the example i provided, but I am hoping to see some different renditions with a wave, maybe without surfboards - maybe with other elements of luau that I'm not thinking of.
I'm going to add a photo of the logos we went with for our expo for the last two years - maybe that will help also.
thanks so much!!
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