DATTCO Sales & Service Expo 2017 (LESS PROMINENT TEXT)Logo Design Contest

Thank you very much,
I'm trying to make the updates on entry #95 and #96

Can we make "the" smaller? And I don't know if we can add something that maybe looks like wheels under the wave. I don't know. WE're going to select you and you win either way! :)

please also review #94

Dear Ms. Elyse,
This is the update also on #92.

Thank you very much

Hi Kassai,
That's definitely more of what i'm thinking. i'm wondering if you can flip the wave over to the left hand side of "Ride the Wave" and put the "DATTCO Sales & Service Expo 2017" text centered underneath the bottom of the wave. Maybe then on the right hand side, we can add something that looks like an outline of the side/front of a coach bus - do you know what I mean?

like this entry?

Hi Kassai,
I think we are looking for something that resembles an ocean wave more - like the attachment that i uploaded at the beginning of the contest.

Dear Ms. Elyse,
What about this and #89?

Hi Kassai,

We just can't seem to figure out which way to go with the design. The tire isn't working for everyone.

I think rather than a round logo, we need something more horizontal, and maybe we need to keep it simpler. I'm not quite sure.

Dear Ms. Elyse,
Is there anything else I can do to enhance the logo and completed the contest?, feel free to let me know your thought.

Thank you very much

regards,
kassai

like this?

Can we make the wave bigger so it takes up more space?

This is the update

and the tread on the tire looks too much like a gear, we'd really like to see some nice detail that actually looks like tread on a tire like the one here: http://comps.canstockphoto.com/can-stock-photo_csp18628101.jpg

I like this. I think the wave needs to be a little bigger and higher. and the text on the tire - we may want to get rid of the faded effect there.

Dear Ms. Elysa this is the update

thank you very much

I have one more rendition i'd like you to try - can we try, rather than a steering wheel, a tire? And can you make it black and make it look like it's shiny and where typically the brand of a tire would be written write "DATTCO Sales & Service Expo 2017" and do the waves, maybe a little darker so it carries from the black tire..

Does that make sense?

i do! i'm going to share with my team and see if they like this direction.

I really appreciate your efforts!

added small wave in the bottom, so look more round as steering wheel

do you mean like this?

oh and get rid of that wave in the center circle of the logo and just do one kind of underneath the steering wheel like in the image I sent you the link for.

Hi Kassai,

Get rid of the ship thing please - our event has nothing to do with ships. I'd use that image I sent you the link for and almost copy it, but put a vehicle steering wheel in place of the ship steering wheel, and the "Ride the Wave" text under the wave.

Dear Ms. Elyse,
This is the update, I'm trying to incorporate ship and vehicle steering wheel into the logo.

Thank you so much.

best regards,
kassai

Thank you very much Ms. Elyse.
I'll upload the revision once I'm done

I can't upload anything else since it's so late in the contest. Here is the link to the image I found

http://image.shutterstock.com/z/stock-vector-helm-emerges-from-sea-wave-logo-for-maritime-companies-230819971.jpg

Hi Kassai,

I am going to upload a concept that I found that I think might be good for our logo. Would you mind taking a stab at it, and instead of the ship steering wheel, a vehicle steering wheel? Or anything else you think might fit? I was thinking the RIDE THE WAVE could be maybe in big letters under the wave that kinda move with the wave and the "DATTCO Sales 7 Service Expo 2017" could maybe be smaller text in the steering wheel or something?

Would you mind giving it a shot?

Dear Ms. Elyse,
this is the updates as you requested.
feel free to leave me the feedback to enhance the logo for you.

thank you very much

best regards,
kassai

Thank you very much,
but in this phase only 1st rank designer can upload any revision

I like the gear idea here - i think it needs to look more like a gear - maybe get rid of the coloring between the teeth of the gear.

hey kassai,

can we get rid of the dark blue background for starters. "DATTCO Sales & Service Expo 2017" should all be together within the logo. Ride the Wave is the slogan and should be the more prominent text in the logo, for sure.

Any way we can maybe round out this logo with a gear or a tire tread type design? to make it more geared toward the transportation industry?

I am really liking this! "DATTCO sales and service expo 2017" should be all together somewhere in the logo. That's the name of the event. It shouldn't be chopped up like that. How can we incorporate some more colors into this?