Dat CakeLogo Design Contest

Fracco,

Thank you very much for the changes.
I got them with no issues.
Everything looks good.

Thanks again.

Kind Regards,

Marvin Thomas

Hello.

Changes just sent to thomasmarvind@yahoo.com

Hello Marvin

No problem, Ill send your request first hour tomorrow.

Regards

Fracco,

I need you do me a very serious favor.

When I was evaluating the image for becoming a winner I didn't realize you had white dots on the lips of the women.

I need you to send me a final draft with the lips complete on both the women.

Meaning without the white dots on the lips.
I need the color of the lips to be uniform or the same.
And I need the outline that you have on the lips to connect all the way to the corners of the mouths on both of the women.

As it is, it is a major distraction on the image. I don't want my customers to gain the notion the my images have some sort of disease or something.

Please send the corrections to thomasmarvind@yahoo.com

Thank you.

Kind regards,

Marvin Thomas
thomasmarvind@yahoo.com

I understand Marvin, no worries, I thought that was the reason the contest was not completed :) Any other thing you need in future please tell me.

A pleasure to be part of your contest.

Regards

Fracco

Fracco,

I would like to apologize for taking soo long to figure out how to close my contest and make you the winner. As you may already know, I didn't have 3 designers in my final drawing which means Logo Tournament would not allow me to close the contest without a 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place winner. I contacted Logo Tournament directly and ask them close out my contest and they did.

Thanks again for your hard work.

Kind regards,

Marvin Thomas

Couldn't wait for making the changes :D

Brown eyes
No shadows behind
Straighten lines behind boob.

Hope changes are correct.

Regards

Couldn't wait for making the changes :D

Brown eyes
No shadows behind
Straighten lines behind boob.

Hope changes are correct.

Regards

Hello Marvin.
Ill submit this changes first hour tomorrow.

Regards

Fracco

Fracco, Thanks again for your awesome work. Just a couple of small things. It's regarding the girl with the brown hair, can you make her eyes brown as well? Also, her back area behind her left boob seems to be a bit round. It make her look like she has a slight hunch back or something. If you can straighten out the back profile behind her left boob that would be great. Like the back profile behind the right boob of the blonde. Lastly, I think the image looks better without the shadows around the two women. The shadows seem to take away from the sharpness / clean-feel of the piece. Can you please remove the shadows from around the women?

Congrats, It looks like you're going to win this contest.

Thank you for your hard work.

Kind regards,

Marvin Thomas

Here are the changes, sorry for the delay, I'll change to my own home and I was all day waiting for some workers to complete details on it.

Hope you like it.

Fracco

Hello Marvin. Sure Ill submit those changes in a couple of hours.

Regards

Fracco

Fracco, I need you to do create another version of the logo. Can you submit a version of your logo where the to ladies are not holding a cake but instead are simply facing the audience shoulder to shoulder (but not too close) with both of their arms resting on the "DAT CAKE" lettering similar to how their arms are now but more like they are leaning / resting on the lettering? I think that would be a better look for the logo. As the logo currently is right now, the actual cake is a bit much. It make the Logo look a bit too busy and desperate to convey the message.

Thank you......and I apologize for any inconveniences.

Kind regards,

Marvin Thomas

Hello Thomas.

Thanks you for your words, I try to give my best. I'll be around here just in case you need something else.

Warm Regards

Fracco

Fracco, thank you for your submission. It looks like you have maxed out what you're gonna do for this competition. Wonderful work. There is nothing else I can have issue with. No we just have to wait and see if anyone is going to top your position.

Wishing you the absolute best.

Kind regards,

Marvin Thomas

Hello Thomas. No worries about the checking :)

I understand your request, will work on the changes to show them in a couple of hours.

Regards

Fracco

Fracco, I can't thank you enough for entering this contest. Your artistic skills are very very good. Sorry for not checking in on you 5 hours ago. The only thing that needs correcting is something I should have mentioned the last time I communicated with you. The issue is the expression on the Face of the Blonde. The one with the Dark Hair has a clear expression on her face. I would like to see a clear expression on the Blondes face.... something like the one that is on the Dark Haired female. The Blonde seems to be upset at minimum of has an off Macro expression on her face. I think the issues is with her right eye, right eye brow, right cheek (Jaw Line) and mouth areas and how they make up her face as a whole. Also, her Blondes boobs are not as well done as the dark haired female. Especially her left boob with relation to her right boob. Can you possible even / symmetry them a bit....if possible? Lastly, and this is not a real issue at all, but is the mouth of the Dark Haired female pushed a bit too far to the right on her face canvas area? Her lips, teeth and expression are done very very well, I'm just wondering if it is a too far to the right on her face canvas area. I'll leave it up to you to push it a bit to the left of her face canvas area...if you want. The blondes lips are positioned very nice as it is, there is simply not a real convincing expression on her face when I look at her.

Thanks again for your hard work.

Kind regards,

Marvin Thomas

Here are the changes, hope you like it.

Sure Marvin, will submit the changes asap :) Happy you like it.

Awesome work Fracco. Thank you for this submission. Almost there. Can you please do a version where the right arm of the girl on the left is laying the say way as the arm of the girl on the right? As it is, the piece looks a bit desperate to convey a message. I think with both of the girls arms relaxed over the words "Dat Cake" will convey a sense of calm throughout the entire art work. Can you eliminate the bottom of the circle under the words "Dat Cake"? Kinda like what you did with the bottom portion of your other submissions. Currently the bottom area of the piece looks a bit like beginner art. Lastly, can you clean up the bottom of the cake with relation to the plate it is sitting on? As it is, it's simply not a clean area. Anyone looking at the piece can tell the cake seems to be falling off the plate. If you want you can make the cake a bit smaller / shorter that would be ok. Overall have a distinctive line where the cake and the plate meet will simply make the image look cleaner. Can't wait to see a cleaned up version.

Kind regards,

Marvin Thomas

Second girl added to the design, both holding a cake as requested. Sorry for the delay but create characters takes more time then simple logo, specially women cause I try to make then hot and with different personality. I think is better to go with a close up on the design instead of full body, close up makes the character better appreciated on his/her details.

Regards

Fracco

Hello.

Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on the changes and submit them asap.

Fracco

Hey Fracco, for the stuff I mentioned above, maybe you can down scale the size of the cakes so the two women holding it in in hands can be blowing their kisses to us in the real world with no issues. Maybe a Cake like the small blue one on your entry #12...but slightly larger

The Thumbs Up expression is ok but maybe if she was blowing a Kiss that may look better. Maybe 2 racially diverse sexy cartoon women standing, facing each other, holding a cake in their hands between them, blowing a kiss to us in the real world viewing the logo may be a great idea.

Thanks for the ranking. If there is any change you wish to see, please tell me, happy to work on it.