I like how you've expressed my name in 73 and 74 (first name up top, last name below, larger font).
However, I like the black jacket against the black background of 71 and 72. That looks like a slimmer shoulder and torso. Could we combine these elements somehow?
I like the clean look of the white shirt and red tie in 71... could we make the pocket square red and white polka dots, or something other than plain white.
Also, can we make the pocket square bigger/more pronounced than in current versions?
This is getting very close, just some tweaking. Well done!!! Thank you!!!
Hello Mr.Kavinoky, I'm glad that you like some of these versions. Here's the logo with the changes you suggested. I hope I understood you correctly. If you have a desire for something, do not hesitate to tell me.