1) can we back off some of the shadow, so we have glass over both eyes? Also, my glasses are a "signature" and if we can add some detail here it would be ideal... they are tortoiseshell... let me know if you want more pics.
2) can we make the facial expression a little friendlier? this looks slightly menacing to me... a little smirk would go a long way.
3) can we add the top of a necktie and perhaps just the hint of shoulders? Curious to see what that would look like... it may be interesting to get rid of the name entirely, and add some shoulders, necktie, and a pocket square... AND DON'T MAKE ME LOOK FAT LIKE THE OTHER DESIGNERS DID! Bald I can live with...