you know what? you had it right before, this particular guy looked better not being serrated. It was definitely work exploring though, and overall your concept is still my favorite.
It's okay! lol I think we need to maybe rotate the character in the circle slightly the the right (I could be wrong) and place it either behind or in front of the Dank - but it definitely needs to be moved to the left to feel more centered. The reason i wanted to try this look is, when it's a perfect square it looks cool on shirts and shit. However, on the site - www.dank.house I will have to rearrange it so it fits. We shall see. play with it some more and it'll come perfect eventually.
I was just thinking...do you think we could try it were, the leaf inside the circle is ON TOP of Dank House? obviously it would slightly touch it just like it is now except instead from the side, on the top/bottom. So the bottom part of the circle would maybe slightly overlap the DANK? You know what I mean?
this is it, this is 100% the one. The serrated leaf and the purple added to the circle around it is exactly perfect. I love it! Thank you so much! I'm not entirely convinced of the addition of the slogan on this one, unless it's a mental issue with the typeface that I'm having? I don't know. But I know that in final files I can use it or not so that's not an issue. I'm crazy in love with this, awesome job dude.
this is it, this is 100% the one. The serrated leaf and the pink added to the circle around it is exactly perfect. I love it! Thank you so much! I'm not entirely convinced of the addition of the slogan on this one, unless it's a mental issue with the typeface that I'm having? I don't know. But I know that in final files I can use it or not so that's not an issue. I'm crazy in love with this, awesome job dude.
OMG the crown is adorable, it's perfect. So hard to pick between these two as these are both fantastic, but I think I'm going to go with the leaf alone especially now that it's serrated.
:) Thank you for rating that has been given, of course .... you will definitely get it all and I will revise it as good as possible, I will revise it tomorrow :) .... because I now still was on his way out of town ... please wait patiently.
Character concept is sick, bro. I cannot decide which one I like better. I guess I'll have to ask some friends what they think. When comparing #13 with #11. The only things I can think of in regards to possible, minor tweaks? Maybe (1) adding the line detail, or at least some line detail in the leaves. It's VERY clear that we're looking at a cannabis leaf, and that I love - but if you could just throw a few raw, sketchy type leaf lines in there so we can compare the two against each other that would rule. Also, as stated in comment about #12, instead of red, somehow adding a neon purple or perhaps even a neon/hot pink into the gradient in the circle around the character. Maybe I'll be totally wrong I dunno and I know that red is the natural progression in that particular gradient. However, bright (not dull) purples and pinks are associated fondly amongst stoners. And for this guy, I kind of imagine him with a crown on his head, lol, slightly tilted, oversized almost falling off him in a way, or just a bit too big. I dunno that's not NECESSARY but you did such a kick ass job on the characters I was like damn......food for thought.
Character concept is sick, bro. I cannot decide which one I like better. I guess I'll have to ask some friends what they think. When comparing #13 with #11. The only things I can think of in regards to possible, minor tweaks? Maybe (1) adding the line detail, or at least some line detail in the leaves. It's VERY clear that we're looking at a cannabis leaf, and that I love - but if you could just throw a few raw, sketchy type leaf lines in there so we can compare the two against each other that would rule. Also, as stated in comment about #12, instead of red, somehow adding a neon purple or perhaps even a neon/hot pink into the gradient in the circle around the character. Maybe I'll be totally wrong I dunno and I know that red is the natural progression in that particular gradient. However, bright (not dull) purples and pinks are associated fondly amongst stoners.
I am wildly in love with the characters you've designed. I love the variations of greens, yellows and subtle oranges. The "Dank" type is pretty much exactly what I'm looking for and the little techno-savvy looking house is very creative. These are my favorite so far, the only tweaks I would try if you're up to it are (a) instead of red, somehow adding a neon purple or perhaps even a neon/hot pink into the gradient in the circle around the character. Maybe I'll be totally wrong I dunno and I know that red is the natural progression in that particular gradient. However, bright (not dull) purples and pinks are associated fondly amongst stoners. I'm up in the air about the "House" type. I like it, it fits but maybe try one or two other options just to see? Also, I like the inclusion in this instance of the slogan. Great Job!
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:) You've got it
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Is my revision this time right? :)
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"Just say" and I would do it with a good revision.
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:) Thank you
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