You thickened the letters. I had no focussed on that. Maybe they should be thicker, I am not sure. But, what I had asked is if the circle aspect of the C could be closed some, less open. And then, if you could get away as much as possible from the sharp ended fonts, like spears. They look knife-like. Not appropriate for an insurance broker, at least not for me. But, I like the look, the energy of the logo and so am wondering if you eliminate or reduce spear effect, and create more closed in arcs for the c and b, if it will be working then.