Hi, i like a lot about this, however I don't like the "swish". It doesn't mean anything for me in this context! I think the blue triangular shape is really strong. Can you play around with different type solutions? Be careful not to get the copy too small. We will need to use this in a variety of applications. Thanks!
Still feel entry #1 is strong. We feel that the multiple buildings get busy and make it hard to tell what it is. Not sure the swoop is right...too close to Nike swish. Also need to be able to read company name. Perhaps try and put on too lines and use "&" like "Curtainwalls & Windows Inc." Thanks very much.