The only other change we'd like to see is the word "DENTAL" spread out a little more (like it is in #315) and made a bit bolder. It just gets a bit lost being that size and font. Please do retain the bisecting lines on the sides. Thank you.
This is really close (and we're cutting it really close). From a distance, the R-R river gives a bit too much of an impression of a snake or lizard tail. Can you accentuate the flat top of the "tip of the tail" just a little more so it doesn't register as pointed? Not sure how that'll look, but we're just hoping for a little change.
One more ask, please. Could we see this design with a grey/silver line over "dental" and one with the line bisecting "dental" (lines going out on either side of it)? Thanks!
The owner is really liking this design, but he'd like to see that river a little less tapered at the top through "Crystal"--it just looks a little too thin for the font of that word. Thanks for your help. The contest closes in about 13 hours, so we'd really like to hear back as soon as possible from the top couple designers. Thanks again!
Not sure it won't look horrible: But is there a way you could try to make the "R" in Crystal extend down into the "R" of River? So one long, continuous squiggly river for those two "R"s.
Because we're beyond the selection phase, I'm not sure if you can submit any changes, but we were wondering if you could offer a couple more variations in font/design on this design. We like this color scheme more than other variations you've done, so we're really just hoping to see some minor tweaks of the font and layout. Thanks!
I know there's not much time left, but we're wondering if you could make a variation off of this design, perhaps altering the color, font and shape/orientation of the river a little. Thanks.
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