We are trying to show a ripple effect like in entry 7. If they can add "Careers" and widen what appears to be ripples of water across more of the underside of text think it would would make it easier to understand its water.
We are really wanting to stay away from light blues and keep the colors rich (royal blue) with a shimery feel to it (silver, metallic, etc.). Since the name of the company is somewhat long a playoff on C3 would be interesting.
Anything that is linear in orientation will work great.
Stacked logos text lines on top of text lines will need way more space to stand out.