Thanks again. The rank has changes now. Thanks to the changes made. is there a way that the "Conceptions" in the No1 rank can be re-written in a more informal way with alternatives colors conforming to the brief given originally. We would like this brand to have an instant emotional comfort level with the intended target audience. Look forward to have them. Alternatives can help as well. Thanks again. This is coming good now
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Design #1.. The visual is good, but if the two pink circles in the "CONCEPTIONS" cab made to look like the one in the visual ranked #4 and at the same time retaining the existing essence, theme and the feel of the #1. Also will welcome any more variations around it.
I'm submitting a few more options. Hopefully, I understood and I got the combinations you requested correct. Feel free to suggest further revisions, alternatives or combinations of any of my entries.
I see that #13 was moved up from earlier in the week. Should I pursue a few options from this concept? If so, would it be targeted more to the parents-to-be or would you rather it be a bit more clinical?
I just realized that you had added to your original comment. I had submitted few new options prior to reading your comments, but I'll work on those suggestions too.
Entry 44 and 45 are too good. I quite liked the color combinations. As I head to a closure of this, I have on elast input ...Can you make the size of the logo a little smaller and in the word "Conceptions, use the first 'O' with blue color as the one with Sperm and the next 'O' just as a human egg in pink color and any color or theme variations (some colors can be a little bolder a s well) around this would be useful as well...The target audience is obviously the parents to be (or rather to couples who are struggling to conceive)
I'm submitting various versions of the logo as per your suggestions. At first glance some may appear alike, but every one has some subtle differences such as color combo, size proportions from "Crea" to "Conceptions", letter spacing... I also made the color pallets a bit more vibrant. Some colors may appear slightly different from computer to computer due to monitor's being calibrated differently, different platforms... I (as probably most other designers) will be glad to make any adjustment to get the colors just right in a final file Thank you for your valuable feedback.
I'm adding these versions in case you wanted the more playful look. I noticed that the multiplying cells (growing flower) at one point had jumped to third in the ranking, so here are two more takes. Thanks!