Cowboys of ThunderLogo Design Contest

It's a little too dark. And not too much a fan of the font.

thanks for your feedback...
I made another version on entry #160
please check it out.

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more dynamic , bold with cowboy accent touch but still in simple color
what do you thing about this entry?

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thanks for your feedback...
I made another version on entry #160
please check it out.

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Eh.. Im not too much of a fan of the shape. and the cowboy gets too lost now. Bass Pro logo too small. And the coloring is too light.

base on your shape with little bit outdoor element.
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?

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done....
please take a look my revision on entry #158

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Would love to see some outdoorsy elements involved. Also love the cowboy idea, can I see other options as a cowboy? Nothing too cartoonish, I like how bad ass he looks, I just feel there's almost too much detail there.

This one is cool. Would like to see the Thunder more golden color. And maybe try a different shape? I attached a shape to the contest. Also, would like to see a variation with it saying "Cowboys of Thunder" instead.

Hi John4thHenry
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

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