This last version has the white dot, and also the pupil is more centered, that makes the eye, overall, less aggressive, and more "vigilant"... just another option for your evaluation.
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Thanks for the feedback.
I sent some updates for your evaluation... trying to make the eye less sinister :-).... was not the intention, obviously... the intention was more "we are watching you".
Also I added one little white "dot" that I used in previous logos, seems a little detail, but makes the abstract eye more "human".
Let me know any change or combination that you wanted.
Bests Regards
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Hi
I sent some variations...
Just comment that due that the Title Case is "short"... I mean that the lowercase letters are narrow that the uppercases... so, the global text, overall, is narrow too.
Bests Regards
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One more thing! Can you see the two logos I like best? Could you make changes so the words for the organization name are capital and lower case?
So, instead of COURT WATCH MONTGOMERY
Hi, Thanks for the chance... I'll make the changes and I'll send asap.
Anyway, you can always ask the admin to extend the finalist phase one day more or the time that you want... for sure they will.... it happens constantly. https://logotournament.com/help/contactus
Then, again, the top5 designers will be able to send updates... not just the first one.
Bests Regards
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I just switched you to first so that you can work. I thought 5 could work on adjustments, not 1. That's frustrating! Anyway, thanks for working on variations!
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Thanks for the chance.
Not problem to try the updates... but in this part of the contest, just the designer ranked first is allowed to send updates.... you can switch that position and ask different designers for the updates anytime.
-Tagline needs to be more visible
-Court Watch Montgomery: show us a variation that isn't all capital letters
-We would like Court Watch Montgomery to be the same font.
-We would like Montgomery to be slightly smaller than Court Watch.
-We like your eye design, but feel it takes away from the words. We would like to downplay it a bit so the words stand out first.
-explore different color combinations. We like blue and black.
-We would like to see your ideas for color, but we saw this color combination and thought we would like to see this as one option: blue Hex No: 0072a4 and black Hex No: 231f20
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This version is like the one ranked first, but the lower part of the eye is mirrored.... I hope you like it.
Bests Regards
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This is like #128 (ranked first now), but the lower part of the eye is narrow, trying to be less aggressive.
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I tried to create a more "human watch", being serious, but not too much aggressive.
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Thanks for the feedback.
I sent some updates for your evaluation... trying to make the eye less sinister :-).... was not the intention, obviously... the intention was more "we are watching you".
Also I added one little white "dot" that I used in previous logos, seems a little detail, but makes the abstract eye more "human".
Let me know any change or combination that you wanted.
Bests Regards
fermat
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I sent some variations...
Just comment that due that the Title Case is "short"... I mean that the lowercase letters are narrow that the uppercases... so, the global text, overall, is narrow too.
Bests Regards
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Sure... I'll send now asap.
Bests Regards
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So, instead of COURT WATCH MONTGOMERY
it would be Court Watch Montgomery
I will move you to first position again!
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Thanks for the chance.
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I sent #73 #74 #75 #76 with diferent options of font for the slogan for your evaluation.
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Anyway, you can always ask the admin to extend the finalist phase one day more or the time that you want... for sure they will.... it happens constantly.
https://logotournament.com/help/contactus
Then, again, the top5 designers will be able to send updates... not just the first one.
Bests Regards
fermat
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Thanks for the chance.
Not problem to try the updates... but in this part of the contest, just the designer ranked first is allowed to send updates.... you can switch that position and ask different designers for the updates anytime.
Bests Regards
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-Tagline needs to be more visible
-Court Watch Montgomery: show us a variation that isn't all capital letters
-We would like Court Watch Montgomery to be the same font.
-We would like Montgomery to be slightly smaller than Court Watch.
-We like your eye design, but feel it takes away from the words. We would like to downplay it a bit so the words stand out first.
-explore different color combinations. We like blue and black.
-We would like to see your ideas for color, but we saw this color combination and thought we would like to see this as one option: blue Hex No: 0072a4 and black Hex No: 231f20
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Thanks to consider my designs for your contest.
Please don't mind to ask about any change.
Bests Regards
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