I have incorporated the steam from a cup of coffee into a coffee bean (so that the steam makes the median line of the bean). Please let me know if you want any changes (in terms of font, colors etc). Thank you. (This comment references Entry #117)
Great attempt first up. Please lighten the background color as it is too strong .A different shade of brown is ok. The fresh roasted coffee is too small- slightly enlarge it and maybe in white Please also do one with Coffee Artisans written in its place and or Roasted In South Melbourne since 1912.
I want to apologize for withdrawing all my entries. A fellow designer showed me one of his designs with a steam going through a bean (he used that design a year ago and I wasn`t aware of it.) . Here`s a different approach and I hope you`ll like it as well. If you do, please let me know and I`ll post more variations with the other tag line, too. Thank you.
Its a pity as i thought is was very close to the very top as i was looking for it but unable to find it.
Change the colour to black background and maybe add onto the other side of the bean the steam as well. Use Coffee artisan underneath - please do a couple as i thought this was exceptional.