So this ended up as the lowest rated on my 3rd party feedback today.
There's a lot that people said they'd want to change, comparatively to other designs.
Odds are long that it'll make the final cut, so I figured I'd give you the option to get a list of feedback, or to move on and use your time for other designs.
I'm not crazy about that font, but that is a detail that can be hammered out when the general design is more finalized.
Only tweak I'd make right now is the bean itself... not the biggest fan of this representation... kind of feels like a split bun, definitely better than a yin/yang though.
I like to have just the words "Cosmos" and "Coffee" in the logo... having all three words has gotten to be too busy for what I was looking for.
I like the ring shape and placement, and that you made the bean look less like just a sphere... but... the combination of things you have going on with the bean make it look a little like a bun.
the font is ok, but plain... I was looking for something a little more 50's/scifi/space but not cartoonish/tacky.
I like the idea of having two rings around the logo to border the words a little, but I prefer just the outer ring... having both makes it busier than I was looking for.
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There's a lot that people said they'd want to change, comparatively to other designs.
Odds are long that it'll make the final cut, so I figured I'd give you the option to get a list of feedback, or to move on and use your time for other designs.
Let me know.
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Thank you!!
(Entry #71)
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Entries #68 and #69 with a different coffee bean.
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I'm not crazy about that font, but that is a detail that can be hammered out when the general design is more finalized.
Only tweak I'd make right now is the bean itself... not the biggest fan of this representation... kind of feels like a split bun, definitely better than a yin/yang though.
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Entries #52, #53 and #54
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The words look like they have a 2 tone, or shadow effec ton them... sorta 3d, that makes it blurry at a small scale.
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Thank you!!
(Entry #51)
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I like to have just the words "Cosmos" and "Coffee" in the logo... having all three words has gotten to be too busy for what I was looking for.
I like the ring shape and placement, and that you made the bean look less like just a sphere... but... the combination of things you have going on with the bean make it look a little like a bun.
the font is ok, but plain... I was looking for something a little more 50's/scifi/space but not cartoonish/tacky.
I like the idea of having two rings around the logo to border the words a little, but I prefer just the outer ring... having both makes it busier than I was looking for.
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Comments are welcomed. Thank you!
(Entries #44, #45 and #46)