Delete the outer circle around the words, and I think having the word cosmos on the top, and coffee on the bottom, while deleting the word company, is the way to go.
Maybe have the arc a little bigger, with the portion of it that is closest to the foreground being thicker than the ends... so that it is not equally thick along the length of the arc.
Lastly, the coffee bean... I like the abstraction, but I think it can be a little closer to what a real bean looks like. This is a little too "clean"
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I'm not sure how well the highlight marks would translate to a t-shirt, but it's an interesting addition
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Thank you.
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The many beans planet is interesting, but I think it would ultimately be too busy
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The bean could be a little more "bean" like... here it almost feels like a yin/yang, which is not something I'm going for
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Two things:
1) there are 2 "E"s in Coffee
2) I liked the single bean better than the multiple beans... like the one bean as the planet
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Delete the outer circle around the words, and I think having the word cosmos on the top, and coffee on the bottom, while deleting the word company, is the way to go.
Maybe have the arc a little bigger, with the portion of it that is closest to the foreground being thicker than the ends... so that it is not equally thick along the length of the arc.
Lastly, the coffee bean... I like the abstraction, but I think it can be a little closer to what a real bean looks like. This is a little too "clean"