James, looking good. Could you try one version of a grey duck, sort of a play on a silhouette duck. I like the flat light matte greys so you might play around with it. Thank you.
I like that flying style. You might shrink the font of Core Sound but leave the C and S as you’ve designed them. I think the proportions will look better. You might also try a slightly lighter shade of grey. Thanks.
Better. Thank you. Now make the duck slightly bigger, slight more separation between “Core” and “Sound”, and color “Development” in the same light grey color as the duck wing. Thank you.
James, could you place the bird to the left a little, between “Core” and “Sound”? Could you also try one version of the Core Sound in blue and the “Development” in brown. Essentially just switch the two colors. And also make the duck just a little smaller and color the tail black, the same as the neck, which is what a Red Head duck species looks like. Thank you.
Good idea on the dynamic flying style but I’d probably dial it back a little more and make the duck a little smaller. Please also create a little more separation between “Core” and “Sound” and maybe center the duck between the two words. You might also try one version of “Development” in light grey to match the duck. Thank you.
This is an alternative to overcome the small size of the duck so that it is still easy to see. I slightly darken the duck's body parts such as the back, wing tips, tail and beak.
I like your change here. You might also experiment with setting the duck above the "O" in Core or "O" in Sound. Alternatively you could try to place the duck inside the "O" in Core or "O" in Sound but that would require that you increase the font size of "Core Sound" in order to fit the duck inside the "O".
Very cool color and font combo. One idea for the duck would be to have it sit on top of the "O" in Sound but you might have to reduce the size of the duck so that it's head doesn't extend beyond the "U" in Sound or it's tail doesn't cross the "S" in Sound. The idea would be a cool way to incorporate the logo inside the name. Alternatively, you could flatten it's back a little and put the duck below the "ND" in Sound.
please check my update entry at #81
by putting a space between the words "core" and "sound"
also changed the color of the word "Development" to blue and made it smaller
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James, good design. A few things: I would make the bird a bit smaller and remove the sky/water feature in the backdrop. You might also separate "Core" and "Sound" more as they will be two different words in my entity name. Lastly you might also color the "Development" in the same blue color you were using for the sky feature and maybe reduce the font of "Development" slightly. Thank you.
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this is with a non-pointed line on either side of the word "development"
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I will continue to try to make something that really suits what you want
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how about this ?
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this is with a line to the right and left of the word "Development"
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try making the D in the word sound bigger
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because the contest phase will soon move to the final phase
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try using teal for the words core sound
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Raising the letters C and S also makes the duck's body color lighter
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the idea of adding a house between the words core and sound
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the idea of adding a subtle window between the words core and sound
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the idea of adding a roof and subtle windows between the words core and sound
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this is in a smoother font
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change the duck's flying style and change the color and size of the letters according to your instructions
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I will immediately create a design in a flying duck style like your third attachment and upload it immediately
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Is the duck's flying style like the one in your third attachment in line with the design you are looking for?
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the idea of stacking the words Core and Sound
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changing the color of the core sound word and moving the duck between the core and sound words also changes the color of the duck's tail to black
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this one with a silhouette of a gray duck coming out of the letter O in the word "Sound"
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this is with a gray duck silhouette behind the words "Core Sound"
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change the font to be more masculine and classic
also changed the color to light brown
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idea for creating a CSD initials logo
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Changed the layout and changed the color of the word "Development" to gray
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this is in a more masculine font
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This is detailed with brown fur strands
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I changed the duck's flying style to be more dynamic
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the idea of adding sound vibration lines to the right and left of the word "Development"
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Please check alternative fonts in #112 and #113
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please check alternative entries at #85 and #86
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please check the updated design in entry #84
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please check my update entry at #81
by putting a space between the words "core" and "sound"
also changed the color of the word "Development" to blue and made it smaller
If you have other suggestions, don't hesitate to contact me
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this is with a more realistic duck
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