Hello and thank you for your designs. Sorry but I have been traveling and have been slow to relpy.
I like the way you incorporate the stars into the design, However....it looks a little bit like the US football team Pittsburg Steelers :) ( they beat my team so not a big fan :) lol
I would like to see if you might be able to do a couple things to tweak:
Play with the font being a little BOLDER and the stars being a little smaller and maybe form a subtle pattern in the back ground more like dots and * concept
Also a feeling of movement or Alignment, connnection
Thanks for your entry will be re ranking desings shortly