Thanks for your revision. Can you add some more color into this design. Maybe show me a different look from the same concept. I like the idea, but it's just not grabbing me the way it is.
I really like the variation on entry #15. I would like to see "Christian Church" bigger and some more color variations. None of the other color combinations are grabbing me at the moment.
Not sure I like the logo symbol having two colors, but maybe a different configuration of the words. Would love to see even more variations on this idea. Maybe even some with the logo symbol on the left and the words stacked differently.
Not sure I like the arrangement of "Christian Church" in design #43. Do you have any other concepts that you could submit? I would love to see a fresh approach.