I really like the two circled messy heart - great!! The writing looks a little too busy - something with cleaner lines would be better. Could you try this with all dark blue text, slightly thinner font? Thanks!! Great design!!
Our team has decided we all really like the heart you designed. Could you separate the heart from the text by a half a centimetre and include a thin divider line between logo and text.
Instead of 4 lines have 3 lines of text for the slogan as below:
LINE 1 - Concord Centre for (like the lighter colour blue in your rings) LINE 2 - Cardiometabolic Health (contrasting colour text - possibly tree green, darker than the green in your design #33) LINE 3 - in Psychosis (like the blue above)
Please try an option without "ccCHIP" and an option with "ccCHiP" but make the text much finer point.
These look great, although on #58 would it be possible to make the line slighter shorter and the word "in pyschosis" the same size as the rest of the text, Could you also make the heart slighter larger than the text size. Thanks
Hi there, looking great! Could you try a version of 59 with lines 1 & 3 with a colour blue in between the two blues you have there now, and lines 1& 3 both the same colour blue, thanks!! Maybe also try one with all the text and line in blue, and a third with all the text and line in black. Thanks !!!
Could you also experiment with some finer (thinner) lettered fonts? Thanks!! We have pretty much decided on the heart, just need to get the text right.
Please keep all these designs listed for now, as we haven't decided yet on final colour scheme. I think we like the font in #65, the colour of #63, & the line height of 63, but a slightly thinner dividing line. Could you try these changes? We are nearly there!!