CoEmployersLogo Design Contest

Hi, it's my submissions (#1 and #2). Hopefully pleased.
Please feel free to contact me for any requests. Thanks

Here is my updates (#27, #28, #29 and #30). Thanks

Rafa,

In my comments, I mentioned that I'd been trying to figure this out on my own (for weeks), and that you outdid my efforts in a matter of hours!

Ironically, your updates (particularly #28) are almost exactly what I had come up with.

While it does show the overlap, similar to the graphic from the NAPEO website, #1 & #2 'humanize' the concept, which is an important element. I'm hoping you have a great idea to also conveying the synergy that only results when all three combine to in the form of the coemployment relationship.

I hope I'm making sense, but if I'm not, please help me clarify for you...you're very close.

Much thanks,
David A.

OK. I'll submit my updates ASAP shortly. Thank you.

Dear David,
Here is my updates for new concept on follow up to "humanize" the three element co-employment relationship concept. Hopefully you like it.
Thanks

Ooops.. I meant (#42, #43, #44 and #45). Thanks

Rafa,
There's a saying that "two heads are better than one".

Synergy is defined as "the whole being greater than the sum of the parts".

I'd like to combine those two thoughts graphically, using the heads in the graphic on #1 (and #2).

Can you try to tweak the graphic on #1 & #2 by converging the heads in a way symbolizes this synergy?

OK. I try to converge that consideration. Synergy of heads... I think it will be a great consideration.
I will submit it ASAP. Thank you.

Dear David,
I've come up with my updates (#80, #81 and #82) with main revision on converge the heads of the people and also fixed totally shape as a circle. So it will look little simple and eye catch. Hopefully you like.
Thanks

And here is my updates (#86 and #87) for following the revision on converge the heads. Thanks

Here is my updates(#119 and #120) for revision like your request by PM. Thanks

Thanks Rafa for the updates.

120 is closer to what we're looking for, but 119 still looks too much like a face.

Can you get a lot closer to the lines of xray's design, and play with some different color combinations?

Perhaps some of the following colors in combinations of 3 or 4 colors:
Dark Blue
Dark Orange
Maroon / Crimson / Red
Gold (a slightly darker version)
Black
Pewter

Rafa,
I'm down to 6 days left, and am a bit nervous about the design. I'd like to ask you to mirror what xray had, as closely as possible in terms of design, but to play with the color combinations using 3 or 4 colors at a time.

What are your thoughts on this?

Thanks,
Eric

OK I know, Eric. I'm doing on it revision now. I'll submit it ASAP shortly. Thanks

Here is the revisions (#121, #122 and #123). Thanks

Hi David,

Thanks for keep this going on and thanks also for the ranking.
Perhaps your client feels difficult to make best decision.
Just FYI, now I still wait your response and ready to make any revisions that you want.
I promise that I will make do whatever revisions that you want.
Thank you very much.

Best Regards,
Rafa

From client feedback:

The icon (the graphic of the 3 people) from X-Ray’s submission #109, but I’d like the company name and tagline below it using the font and treatment that Rafa used in submission #120.

OK. Here's my update (#134) with combination the icon of #109 and text of #120. Hopefully pleased.
Thanks

Did you have check my updates (entry #134) ?
Please let me know if you need any other changes. Thanks