entry 9 .interesting but n is not easy to read entry 8 could be interesting if less abstruct.looks like child,s drawing,or crown or cord,but not really a statement entries 12,13,20,22 strong but maybe too strong and not exceptional for red use a softer,brighter red and for orange more yellowish
Thank you for the feedback! On #9 "n" is the same keyhole as "c", but just turned. But OK; I'll create one with "normal n" too. If I can suggest, entry #13 is the strongest from my works in this contest. Letter C is hint to Cocoon, but this with hidden message, key inside it. Plus its clear and simple.
You are right but because our native language is not English ,the incinuation may not be so easy. no 13 is strong but if you go through my latest comments,strong and strict etc should not be the only concern
12,13,20 just realized that you design a key inside C tHE IDEA IS REALLY NICE BUT SINCE IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO REALIZE IT MYSELF ,IM AFRAID THAT HARDLY OTHERS WILL GET THE MESSAGE. WHAT IF YOU TRY MAKE IT MORE OBVIOUS,STILL ARTISTIC/HINT
Thank you for the feedback. OK, Im thinking of these things. But maybe you can change your mind - it will work much better with this hidden message, believe me. You can find some smart logos from the net http://logofaves.com/highest-rated-logos/ if you want compare how beautiful and simple it can be. Im trying to find way, how to show the key a little bit more but not damage the concept. Btw, entry #38 have now "normal" letter N.
I CHECKED THE SITE INDEED SOME LOGOS ARE EXTREMELY CLEVER AND ELEGANT MICHAEL JACKSON FARM ELEPHANT COMBS ORGAN DONNATION MISTER CUTTS WRAP (PAGE 8 .ACTUALLY THIS IS IS THE RIGHT YELLOW ALMOST..) ANIMAL RESCUE SOFIA OPTICAL STRENGTH BAR CODE (I LIKE THE YELLOW BACKGROUND,SHALL WE TRY IT??) ON WINW NEW WAVE OK JAPANIZE PHOTO FESTIVAL TUTTI I FIORI DJ LOOP CITY CLIQ SUSHI CANCER THERAPIES FOUNDATION FILM CENTER EXPO 2012 THE ARCHITECTS REVOLVER WAVE BRAND EVENTS THREESOME DRESSERIE PRAXEIS ZOIS MILL ANDY FIORD STUDIO G BAR LABYRINTH BANANAS FILMS ALPHABETEE TOP SPICE
the new entries are not so nice.the hint of the key disappears. stick to the key CONCEPT and emphasize the outline OR color the key with a brighter yellow...
#67 STILL THIS IS MY FIRST CHOICE I LOVE THE COLORED BACKGROUND THE OUTLINE OF THE KEY SHOULD BE IN GREY SO AS TO STAND OUT ALSO ADD THE ''TEETH " OF THE KEY
#38 WORK WITH COLORS PUT YELLOW BACKGROUND AND LIGHTER SHADES OF COLOR + GREY I LIKE THESE STRONG COLORS MAKE IT VERY AGRESSIVE
#86 afterall this is my favourite. please try on a darker grey background.please send 2-3 different shades of darker grey light grey is weak. letters either all red,or combo of yellow and red
TRY 100 ON DARKER BACKGROUND NOT TOO DARK MAYBE 2 SHADES DARKER 104 IS MY FAVOURITE FOR THE MOMENT BUT MAYBE "TOO CHINESE ". REMINDS ME OF ADVERTISEMENT FOR CHINESE RESTAURANT ALTHOUGH IT IS PLAYFUL AND VIVID. SOMETHING IS MISSING/ A SMALL DETAIL THAT WILL MAKE IT THE ONE....
ENTRY 103 IS OUR TEAM;S FAVOURITE,ALTHOUGH I PREFERE YELLOW TRY THE FLNG: KEEP GREY BCGRND BUT A BIT LIGHTER ADD A BIT OF RED (real estate),YELLOW (consultants)
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AS THE RIGHTING CREATES A COLUMN /BUILDING, WHAT IF YOU ADD ON TOP OF IT AN ABSTRUCT "ROOF" (JUST A PENCIL MARK IN RED ,as the N of the COCOON. SO AS TO APPROACH THE CONCEPT OF OUR ENTERPRISE) ..in red color IF YOU DO NOT UNDERSTAND ,LET ME EXPLAIN BETTER THANKS
YES!!!! DO YOU LIKE IT? IT MAKES A RELEVANT STATEMENT TO REAL ESTATE. THE ROOF PLEASE TRY NOT SO EDGY,MORE CURVE AND ABSTRUCT. BUT THIS IS WHAT I MEANT !!! THANKS
Dear Denju It seems that your logo ranked 1st...,is still my favourite. I would like the following trials: -see the logo in white background -place the logo in grey "box" following the shape of the logo.This is ,because in case we want to use it on a white paper (apart from the business cards),to be able to isolate the logo. -because the logo is interesting but not easy to read,please add under the logo the word COCOON REAL ESTATE and skip the word consultants. -I don't like so much that the n & c are different what I mean is that n is wider than c I suggest that you might be forced to make "o" more round so as to keep the same margins try some alternatives -as for colors :let's see always on WHITE background ,different combos,playing with red,yellow and dark grey for letters -KEEP THE "roof" above the letters (not the curved one) Thanks
Thank you! I'll make these changes today. But n & c is the same size there. Its the same, just turned 90 degrees and if u put it these in the box, these will fill it the same way. But ok, I'll create one version, where c & n cutted out from c again.