Coastal Shine CleanersLogo Design Contest

revisi on hand holding broom

any other suggestion?

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done on entry #87
please check it out.

Hey can we lose the thumb that is holding the broom?

change the outline and 'SHINE" font...
any other suggestion?

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please check on entry #86

Can you please make the word shine more of a bubble font

let me clear the direction...
you want me to change all outline color to blue navy, am i right?

I can’t tell if the outline is black or navy. Should be navy and slightly lighter

am I in right direction?

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please check entry #85

Can you make the turtle slightly more of an olive green and have the shell match? Trying to make it
Look like a sea turtle. Can we make the broom slightly smaller? You’re going to win the contest

color alternative.

I made color option on entry #70
please take a look

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revision
- make the front of his body and his mouth white
- Make the green color just slightly darker
- make the head smaller
- font alternative and add a shine star to the top of the “I” in shine
am I in right direction?

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please check entry #45
I made some revision base on your feedback.

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did you have reference for the font, maybe link from google..?

and please use 'mark tools' from logo tournament to make clearly direction

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Can you make the front of his body and his mouth white? That’s the way the sea turtles look. Make the green color just slightly darker can you make the head a tad smaller? I don’t like that font and can you add a shine star to the top of the “I” in shine?

blue version character.
any other suggestion?

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revision
remove the hat, little bit change on background and make the font softener.
am I in right direction?

also I made the blue version character on entry #30
please check it out.

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thanks for your feedback.
I made some revision base on your feedback on entry #29 and #30
please check it out.

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Also make it a softer font and the turtle should be more blue than green

Hey can you remove the hat and shirt from the turtle and make it look more like a sea turtle? Can you also simplify the background within the circle?

Hi
zackbryantre
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

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