Coastal Breeze RV ParkLogo Design Contest

The colors and text may be too muted to show up well on cards and signs. I like the concept but would like to see more 'pop'. I'm ok with you experimenting with colors beyond the examples given.

i will work on and upload again soon amy :)

Sorry one other thing. Need to remove the 's' at the end of Park

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Thanks for quick response. Now that the colors are more prominent the palm trees are looking a little cartoonish. Do you have a more refined/elegant look for palm trees (if palm trees can look elegant)?

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I will work on and upload again amy :)

I like the smaller sun in 23 or 25 versus 24

I like #27 but when I try to picture it on a business card or sign, the graphic may be too tall in relation to the text. Can you try one where you enlarge the text and/or shorten the graphic? I'd still like the graphic to run the width of the text like you have it now.

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hi i have just uploaded #29 , is this what you meant ? amy :)

and #30 is even smaller :)

Looks good. We have several family members also looking so may send you a few more ideas.

The first one is to outline the letters of "RV Park" or change the coloring so it stands out a little more.

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yer thats fine i'm always happy to help i have made some colour changes too :)