Coast Fiduciary ServicesLogo Design Contest

Hello,
Here are my first options...
#2 #3 #4
Please dont hesitate to leave a comments and advices.
Regards!

Hi, again the wave need to revise. and other comments in change to #2 in # 3 and #4.

#3 & #4 - the wave lines on these two is a little easier to read COAST rather than either #2 if some one can read it in # 3 and #4. I think the contrast for the color for COAST from blue to black separated by the wave might look better if the word COASTshades from a bright darker blue shading from the top to change the blue shades getting lighter at the bottom but without the wave in the word but maybe the wave can go somewhere in a black with a gray/silver accent? The wave might be substitute the line iis somewhat inviting?
In #3 and #4 you misspelled the Personalized on these logos. Your spelled it Pesonalized.

#2 - I started this comment and then it did not go to you for so I'm rewriting it again to you.

A lot of my business from people who are fiduciary might also use the word in their business. If my business loses the effect of COAST, the wide 2line wave on COAST blocks the word or appears to look like it is crossed out so the visible name is only for Fiduciary Services but not Coast as the emphasis. COAST is a geographical business I use for 3 central coast counties - Santa Barbara, Ventura (primarily), and also north LA county area also.

Also the logo on this one is very plain without any detail focus included with my by-line "Personalized Asset & Care Management" - it looks plain as fiduciary and crossed out Coast in my name. thank you

Hello,
in the slogan you noticed the mistake is due to the fact that you have wrote it that way.

Here is update #5

here are new ones #13 #14

and here #15 #16

Entry #13 - I think the symbol showing "S" isn't connecting this . Not a wave. can you consider using something else?

Saw your #15 and #16 entries. I prefer the blue and black and rather not something with gold for these.

thanks

here are the updates #32 #33 #34 #35

Entry #34 & #35 I like your wave designs are much better with these two better than I had originally and the colors for both ar better.

entries of #32 and #14: I like the symbol with the colors for #32 better than the colors as sharper used for #14.

For Entries for #32 and 34 - maybe will be much visual and striking look good to leave out the byline on these two so they both will be without look so wordy.

Entry of #32 is the best still, wouls like to see if you would start it the same except remove the byline to compare it. Colors are teh best.