I like your entry - Coast is an accent with a wave with the other two words you designed them. The colors look perfect.So you know, I made an error by mistake with one word by accidentally you know the error I did, so the word "Personalized" has to be corrected. My error is not "Pesonalized"
I wonder if I should consider the "Personalized Asset & Care Management" byline be removed on the logo since so many wordsare better if more simple if not so wordy on a logo. The logo looks clean and easy to see it. I could use the byline with my name or whatever written anywhere if I wanted when I add the logo to something anywhere else.
Appears sophisticated and also inviting. Would you do consider anymore else with the wave longer, or more - one behind(made a shadow or lighter) and one in front or whatever you feel the wave line is other creative more? or not.
Wave seems easily understood with "COAST". My only other if you would consider any option with the initals "CFS" for my business name creative with a wave for the logo?
I want to ask you another comment on #17, maybe it makes clear to my comments.
I like the original #17 very well, my prior comment was to just leave off the byline "Personalized Asset & Case Management" . It was my prior paragraph on Sept 9th in the last comment yesterday.
If you also choose to do the option without the byline but consider a change with the wave or not. If it needs any more length of the wave or balance is perfect as it stands - your choice.