I really like the coloring and crispness of this design and I can see you are very talented. I think the logo part is a bit large and I would like to see something a little smaller. I love the way it appears shimmery and it reminds me of the Mercedes Benz emblem- That's a good thing! That part, I really like. We have offices in Austin, TX and Beverly Hills and I do want to convey class, elegance, and professionalism, just a little more elegantly. Does this feedback help?
Thank you for your time and effort, it is much appreciated!