No. I appreciate the effort, but its far from what I am looking for. I was on Google last night and found a Seafood Restaurant called "Blue2O Seafood". Kind of a similar idea to ours with the play on water/H2O. I like the way it looks on the side of the building. I am looking for creative ideas on how to play this logo. Drop the Cleanse... Hydrate... Energize... for now. I really want to see the logo design without that I think. There have only been a few that look good with it anyway. I may come back and add it, but without the ... at the end. Don't get so caught up in my earlier instructions. I am not an artist, that is why I am posting on here to get someone's artist mind to see what this could be. Remember, we are a cleansing and detoxification spa. So it needs to be clean and simple, but look elegant and also have some femininity as well. Our target audience is mainly women 35+ and then athletes next. I am torn between a high 2 and a low 2 so use your judgement as you build. Thanks!