Feedback: I need a different font, but we are moving in a good direction. The problem is that font looks like an N instead of an R at the end of clear. I used a font called mistral. Also, I like the idea of possibly having a symbol in front, but I am not sure that is the right symbol for us. Thanks
1. delete the symbol 2. change the font to something similar but easier to read and the word "clear" can be seen 3. possibly change the font for the tagline so it stands out more
Thank you for all of your submissions. I've pretty much knocked most out and have really identified what we want. I've attached a link to 2 pictures but let me explain what they are.
1. The first is a pic of a design that I really liked. I liked the way the water line runs through the letters and the colors. I also like the exact placement of the bubbles and the crispness of the bubbles themselves. I like the font. I like almost everything other than the fact that the 2 be lowered down and some other tweaks which you will see in the next pic.
2. The next pic is something that I designed (so don't judge it). I am not a designer, but I was simply trying to show what can be done as a possible solution to taking the 2 and lowering it so that it resembles the H2O symbol. My idea was a thin line or something like that to keep the continuity of the design. If not, the words cleanse, hydrate and energize drop and it looks awkward. Don't worry about my font, color, the bubbles, etc this second picture is simply my best try to show the designers what I want.
Check your private message for the link...
I am extending the contest. Hopefully you can "see" what I "see" now with the pics. I really like the bubbles from the pic that I sent, where they are, and the crisp look of them. Also, I really like their font and the colors so hopefully you can match it up perfectly.
Sorry for so much info, but I am trying to be as clear as possible. Thanks. Also, my Skype address is glen.crawford12 if you want to Skype on it and wrap this up. My email is glen_crawford@me.com.
Please try and thin the line out just a hair and also make the dots between the words at the bottom a smaller tighter dot in the same color as the words.
Additionally, I see that you are still reluctant to put the bubbles in the way that I am looking to. Like I said many people submitted w bubbles and I asked the person who runs the site about it and he said "your logo and business is water and bubbles are bubbles, pretty standard." So if your not comfortable your not comfortable but like I said its our brand so should be fine.
One more thing is that font at the bottom makes the words look too condensed, maybe try a different font. If you make all those changes (with or without bubbles) I will keep it in the top 5 to present to client, but I know they did like the bubbles. Thanks