Any way to make the Clean a bit more flowy? perhaps using a scripty font? And the fade in thrive is just a bit too yellow in the center, maybe a bit more even a color?
Can you capitalize the C in Clean? and please don't change the font. But could the space between the words Clean Thrive be a space and not just a little
Thanks for the feedback and the rank. here's the revised version. I hope I'm on the right direction. If you have any other suggestion, Please let me know, do not hesitate to ask. I'll do the best I could.