I love your entry, but the boss is less wowed. One of the things he said is that we have to be able to silkscreen the logo when necessary.
Can you stretch out this logo? Place Full Contact Audio all on the same horizontal line? And still keep it fresh the way you have it? This way, the words "Tactile Transducers" will be bigger, and I would suggest a black font for those words, not grey.
Thank you. We have asked for an extension to work with 2-3 finalists, and you are one of them.