Nice. Appreciate that you lost the serifs, but i'm concerned it's now too bold and heavy. Could you try softening the font a bit? (And either add a period after Simplify or divide the 3 words w/bullets)
Like what you did with the rooflines connecting to the CK. Fewer serifs might be easier for my (senior) clients to read. Larger print for the slogan will help too.
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Any other variations u want to submit in these last 2 days?
Also, I'd like to try to stick to just 2 colors if possible.
Thanks
Nurwan
Any way to make the slogan letters a little bigger? (My clients are older and have weaker vision)
- Love the soft flair at the bottom right "foot" of the K.
- Very happy overall with the "CK" & rooftops part of the logo. Nice job.
- Could you please try some font variations on the word "Transitions" and on the slogan? Nothing radical. Just slight variants.
- Could you also please try some color variations on the whole logo?
For example....
- "Transitions" and slogan in green. Black separator line.
- Green CK & rooftops. Blue Transitions and slogan.
- Green & gold as the 2 colors
- Brighter blue (a little bit turquoise?)
Thank you again for all your hard work!!