Hello Mr Drraney7... i submit 2 designs...entry #18..entry #17 to to show you how i have it in my mind... If you like the idea please tell me to imrpove it... If you don't tell me again to make something else.... thanks
Great work. You are very far ahead of everyone else as far as what I'm looking for. I really like the color scheme you've used. I'll throw some suggestions your way on how to stay on top.
1) Maybe make the background a sunset to add more color 2) I would prefer a more rectangular look as opposed to the circular look you first submitted. 3) I like the different skylines you're incorporating, but the one in the front could use a little tweaking
Aside from that everything looks great. As I said your style is what I'm looking for, so I cant wait to see what you come up with next!
Fantastic changes. My only concern now is that this logo is going to be used on business cards as well, so some of the detail (although I really like it), won't be able to show up as well. Perhaps if you could take some of the depth detail out and make the buildings have a more linear affect, it would be more presentable on a business card or smaller piece of advertisting.
i really love the reflection of the sun in the buildings...:(..lol i will make and a simpliest version for smallers uses... About the backround color the white is ok or you have something else in your mind??
White is just fine. And I could not be happier with the font choice for "city surfing", its looks great. The buildings look awesome, but I do need something that can go on a business card so unfortunately some detail will have to be left behind.
Yeah I think I prefer the white. Now if you could just make the whole concept a little simpler with less depth and a more linear skyline, it would show a lot better across all formats.
Another thing to consider is that I'm working with several cities across the nation, some with mountains, some with water, some with nothing but buildings, so maybe incorporating all sorts of different features in a simple way could look really sharp... just some thoughts im kicking around in my head!
The logo still needs to have less depth to it, more of a 2-D as opposed to 3-D affect for business cards purposes. This would look great on a T-Shirt, but I need a logo that will work across all formats
That's an improvement, but it still needs to be all on one linear plane. I like entry #33. If you could stretch out the picture so that it is more rectangular than square, and line up the buildings/mountains all on one line instead of each city being behind one another, then we might have a winner
I like what you did with the curved styling on #36. I would prefer if all of the buildings/mountains were brought up to the foreground as opposed to moved back.
To be more specific, maybe just have a very small trim of water at the bottom, then have all the buildings/mountains and other scenery in one line, with no water breaks in between, right above the water line, with the "city surfing" font written like you have in it #36 right now.
As it stands right now, you are hands down my favorite for how "city surfing it written", but i need the background to be simpler and bigger for business card purposes (but i really like your style/color scheme)
Another logo, another improvement. Now if you could just stretch the skyline of the buildings across the logo so that it has less of an island feel, and make it more of a rectangle stretching from the C in City to the G in Surfing. I like the water in front, but not necessarily on the sides. Also, try to make the next one not as tall, I want the emphasis to be more on the name city surfing than the background.
Logo #57 is awesome, great changes man. I really like the big city with "surfing" still in the original font you did. This is a very sleek look, combines the two things I wanted, I'm very happy with it.
The only thing I would change is the detail inside of the word "City". I do need to incorporate some sort of city skyline/buildings in there, but it needs to have less detail than you have in there right now for when it is shrunken down.
After further review, I still think entry #60 is your best work. It's my favorite color scheme that you've thrown out there. You may be on to something though with simplifying the skyline design in entry #77. Right now you are just slightly behind heru's design. I'd love to see what else you can come up with to jump to the top.