City StudentsLogo Design Contest

My initial ideas
feedback appreciated for further improvements

Regards
Dennis

Dennis,
Not sure I like the people in the circle and would like the "City" font to be the same that is in the church logo. I like all three student fonts but I think I prefer the "students" fonts in entries 5 and 6. Thanks for your work!

Thanks for the feedback, submitted some other options
Please have a look

Regards
Dennis

What is the dot above the City Students writing?

can you make the landscape in the circles not include the people or the book? Not sure what you do with the space once you take the people and the book out. But you are creative...that's why I'm paying! Thanks for all of your work.

Also like the students font you used in the ones where the "S" is uppercase.

Thanks for the feedback, i have submitted some variations without the books and human figures
Kindly check #51, #52 and #53

The dot on the 'S' of Students is actually making a human form, so i put the dot as a head. I have removed that in new submissions

Please check

Dennis

Definitely like the changes!

Thanks

Dennis, can you make the circle in entry 52 a bit more abstract than a circle?

Submitted some abstract brush stroke circles as requested
Please check #76, #77 #78

Dennis

#79 and #80 with diff.circle

Subtle yet great changes. You are at the top of my list right now. Keep the ideas coming if you've got more.