I like them very much. Could you do one of the split lyres in color like the black background with the font in a contrasting blue. Just a thought to see if that might work. Thanks so much.
I like your interpretation of the lyre quite a bit, it has wonderful movement. I do feel that the fonts and their placement make the design feel a little busy. Maybe some structure created by the fonts to contrast the beautiful flow of the lyre.
Thank you for your great work. I would love to give you the opportunity to submit any additional changes or new designs you would like. I feel the lyre design is a bit simple and needs some adjustments.
Keep in mind we are looking for a design we can use in may different ways. We must have a design where the name can be used without the image and is interesting on its own we also need a design that can work in a horizontal orientation, a vertical orientation, and a image that can stand on it's own as well.
I hope this helps give you information to move forward.
dear contest holder thank you for the message I worked on some variations for your logo #162, #163, #164, #165; please feel free to contact me if you need any revisions
That is great. #164 an d#165 are great. I would like to see the lyre done in full in a version because there are times we will need to use the lyre on it's own. I like your color choices as well. I would love to see a version with a white background also. Thank you.
Hi, here are some revised versions with the lyre done in full, and white backgrounds #170, #171, #172, #173; please take a look and let me know what you think; Syl
Yes!!! I like this new version very very much. All of your versions of this design are great as well.
I may ask to see it in some different color variations but I love your choice of black, gray and gold. Very classic simple and elegant but still current. I really like it a lot. I might like to see it in some variations of deep blue or purple, but I have to say the black and gold is great.
It may also be interesting to see how you would shade it if it were on a very deep blue or purple background as our future website might end up being a very deep variation on one of those colors. Would you see it all white? or shades of gray and white? Or do you see other colors going well with either of those tones. To be clear we do not like the combination of purple and blue together.
Wonderful work, Thank you!
P.S. Would it be ok to move some of your past designs to the uninterested list? I do not want to offend you or make any negative points against you (I don't know if that counts against you?) I am just attempting to clean up the Que and help my eye stay focused on the designs that are best. Does that effect you in a negative way when designs are voted "uninteresting"?
I'm glad you like this new versions of the logo!! I will submit soon some updated versions with different background colours as you suggested, in shades of blue and purple;
P.S. there's no problem rearrange some of my past entries, it won't effect me in any negative way ; Syl
#162 and #163. I didn't see these for some reason until now. I like very much your use of a different font for Ballet, but maybe it is not the right font for us. It feels a little hand written and not quite formal enough. I like it but I have to think a bit on the image it portrays. Maybe also play with that idea a bit and see if you can find a font variation that might in a subtle way tie back to the movement and delicate gracefulness of the lyre you have designed. Thank you again for the amazing work.
So I am just throwing this out there to a few of the designers. What about doing the image in an art deco style, we are getting a lot of lyre's and not sure how we feel about them. I am not feeling 100% on the designs. I just thought that art deco especially in the theaters here in los angeles. It might be nice to see that style incorporated into our logo. Feel free to use what ever image you think might look best, lyre, harp or anything else you see fitting with our theme of los angeles "city of angels" and ballet.
That new design is really beautiful and interesting. I really love it.
I think it is best to keep the words super simple because the design is so intricate. I would love to see the same design #230 with a different font. Something super clean and simple. I would love to see it with the ballet in something other than the bright gold. Maybe a variation of the color used in the image? What do you think?
Feel free to play with the font and its placement a bit. We also will need to see a version without the image as it might be used with out the image as well.
It also might be good to see this design done in dark purple tones, although I do like your black and gold color scheme it is very elegant. We will be basing a whole new website off this scheme and I like your choices for #230 very much, but I am having trouble visualizing a color scheme with it. It might be a bit subdued. What are your thoughts?
dear contest holder, thank you! here are updated entries with adjustments: new background colour ( dark purple tone, so it can fit better with your new website) , and some variations with different fonts, more simplified look #236, #237, #238, #239, #240, #241, #242 ; Kind Regards, Syl
Alright!!! I like #139. I think that is my favorite font. I will have to get some opinions.
I like the style of the design very much, but it is a bit busy and it seems to confuse the viewer as to what they are supposed to be looking at. Not sure how to direct this in better direction.
I think the ones with the A missing the line and the L backward are a little to futuristic. I don't like the gold and purple together (too LA lakers :) and I am not a fan of the font of #239 it reminds me of a renaissance fair we have here in the US. It is too ornate.
An idea for you maybe make our initials "CAB" the subject matter within the image. That would make sense to the design. Rather than just being random shapes
So we do want to see an image using our initials CAB rather than a design or a lyre. If you are up for more work we would love to see what you would do. We love your style and color choices and would love to see something from you with this new theme, if you have time for more work. Thank you again for everything.
Ok so last 13 hours of the tournament. This has been a crazy experience. Just wanted to throw one more note out there to our top competitors, if they have any last design for use using our initials CAB as the image. Thank you for all your work. You all have made this process really difficult but in a great way, your work has been so great, it has been hard to make up our mind which one to go with. We will have to think very hard about the winner.