No. The way you have 102 is great. Each number stands on its own. But with Choice, the way the letters interweave with one another makes them hard to read. With "The Twin Tier's Greatest Hits" I'm looking for bold block letters, not cursive, or the way you have them sort of rounded. Straight and strong, easy to read from far away.
I like the layout and the colors. I think if CHOICE was just CHOICE without all the dynamics it would be easier to read from a passing car. I'd also use a blockier from ny for the slogan. Don't touch the layout or the colors though. Maybe add a white outline around the whole thing to make it pop.
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