We appreciate your work and your comments! You have some very good ideas. Horizontal layouts will fit into intended spaces best. However, we do not want to limit possibilities. Both of your layouts have appeal. Any stylistic improvements you can make to either or both will be appreciated. We realize that the wordiness of our tag line, and our need to include it, could be limiting to some extent. As minor considerations, there could be some experimentation with type styles and a deeper blue. Thanks for all that you are doing to help us.