I AM AvatarLogo Design Contest

the lines are too heavy.. there is not a metatron cube geometry incorporated.. please see instructions

like #24 ?...

Satto,

Can you brighten up #35 so colors pop more.. .balls more yellow, blues more sapphire....more light in the background behind the geometry?

Also, can you try to make the "A" figure pop out of the design. (Please see website...http://childrenofthesun.org/i-am-avatar-logo/)

Even tho this is #1.. I ask if possible to make some improvements.

Hi,
#55 #56 #57 ... Is that the right direction?

yes.. but somehow to make this A really stand out while keeping the geometry in place.

#65.. maybe the A lines in the blue color
the balls golden yellow.. more saturation less exposure maybe

its very close

Satto... okay..

the colors are not right... please go back to #35... but try to bring these balls into a very rich gold/golden yellow.

The black line of the "A" feels heavy. Can you thin this a little and put this line in blue... and try other colors.

I think we have the design.. but now it is getting the coloring right. Can you try some different options?

Again.. please try to get gold on those balls.. and maybe even the "A" in gold as well. This to look and feel very elegant.

Thank you!!

The typeface on I AM AVATER, it looks like it is dropping out.

Satto, I still love your design.. but I would like to see the changes if you can.

Satto,

Please see my final design changes...please, if you can. I am very excited about this.

http://childrenofthesun.org/satto/

Hello,
Thanks, here: #85 #86 #87 (I love #85 :)

oh my.. this is it satto. I love the type, whoa.

now.. can you try making the white A in the design have jsut a little more depth and dimension... nothing major.. but maybe a drop shadow.. or a slight glow...

I still like 85... is it hard to put a little glow just on the "A"?

a little glow like this? : #90 #91 #92

Here is what I mean...
http://childrenofthesun.org/satto/

I like the color of the letters in 92

I like the colors of the letters of #92.. blend the gold with a little more white so that it matched better with the white "A" in the design.. just bring balance to the overall color theme now.

#93 and #94 ... :)

The "A" now just looks like a thick white line. There is no glow. Can you make the line remain thin but have a little glow?

Also, there is a white dot on the right side that looks strange.

Satto.. here is a better example of what I mean..
http://childrenofthesun.org/satto/

my example is not exactly right… it is still too much glow.. but do you see what I mean? What do you think?

can I call you?

satto,

we are so close.. and it is getting late for me. I cannot approve this until satisfied. I am not going to be here tomorrow. So, please let me know if you will be able to do these final changes. Are we able to talk on the phone? Or, finish logos later? I have to also know how this is going to look on white background too.

let me know your timing.

I'm sorry, Logotournament rules doesn't allow me to speak to you outside this site, but don't worry, i'll work on your logo til it's perfect for you!

#102
The type is perfect.
Keep looking at that "A" in the design.
It needs something and I do not know what.
Look at what just came in.

satto,

With my hands on my heart and bowing to your excellent work, I want to thank you so very much for all of the effort you put into this logo. It was a VERY hard decision.

Now, I understand that you have written Ivan saying that the "A" is copywrited. Well, I am the one that asked you to do this and have this in writing from the page in my website. http://childrenofthesun.org/satto/

I am also the one that asked Ivan to do this and also have this in writing. Please walk away from this frustration.. it is not valid what you are saying. And, I understand why you are a little upset. His designs came in at the last minute and really surprised me too.

Again, I send my gratitude and if you are interested to continue working with me, I always have a lot going on. You can write to me at: tiara@childrenofthesun.org.

in love,
Tiara