I like the concept, however I think the fish tail is a little too abstract and that it might not be evident to everyone. I think if it was a drawing of a redfish tail with a spot like when they are tailing in the flats. Google "Tailing Redfish" and look at the 4 photos that show up. The 1st and 4th photo are kind of what I am thinking of.
#21, 22, 42 & 43 - These show 2 dots. The normal redfish only have one dot per side. When I said to make it the dot over the "I", I meant to slide it over so the dot on the tail was over the "I".
Of the five you posted, I like # 42 best. There are a few things that I would like to see. 1. The tail needs to be a little less angled. 2. There should only be one dot on the tail. The dot that is closest to the tail is correct. The one over the "I" needs to be removed. 3. Try to slide the entire tail to the left so the dot is aligned over the "I". 4. Replace the bubbles with grass leaves. See the photo of our wrapped motor home on our Rockport Rattler face book page.
Of the five you posted, I like # 42 best. There are a few things that I would like to see. 1. The tail needs to be a little less angled. 2. There should only be one dot on the tail. The dot that is closest to the tail is correct. The one over the "I" needs to be removed. 3. Try to slide the entire tail to the left so the dot is aligned over the "I". 4. Replace the bubbles with grass leaves. See the photo of our wrapped motor home on our Rockport Rattler face book page.
# 48 is much better. I would like one small change. Combine the dots into one dot and make it not quite as big and make it not a perfect circle. These are not uniform in size or shape. Make it a little oblong and a little smaller please.