I like the words stacked on top of each other in Entry #4. I would prefer that the words Charleston and Hypnotherapy start with capital letters. I want to convey a sense of authority and professionalism and EMPOWERMENT and I think that all lower caps feels off in that regard. I like the font. I like the phrase underneath!
As for the flower, I think it is too washed out and conveys a feeling too soft and feminine. I would like to see some variations of different things there..Maybe a magnolia or a butterfly or even maybe a palmetto tree since I live in the land of palmettos and magnolias...
I wanted to see what it would look like if I double-spaced "CHARLESTON" and then made it a little smaller. This puts a little more emphasis on "HYPNOTHERAPY" Let me know what you think...