Chapman Filmed EntertainmentLogo Design Contest

Welcome to Logo Tournament, here are my first entries.
Any feedback is welcome & appreciated.
Thank you,
Don

Film stock should be rotated 90 degrees. Panther needs to be stronger; too soft.

Film stock should be rotated 90 degrees. Panther needs to be stronger; too soft. #31 panther is stepping on Chapman.

Thanks for the ranking & feedback, I will work on revisions asap.
Don

Here are my first revisions with the stronger panther & turned film.
Would you like to see any using my concept of #31 & #108 with the
Chapman University logo included on the film?
Thanks,
Don

Please let me know of anything I can do to improve on my latest entries.
Thanks,
Don

#200, #201 & #204 Like the direction this panther is going - perhaps it's a little too large to be jumping through the opening size? Would love to also see a version using the concept of #31 and #108 to compare.

Sure thing, I will get to work on revised concepts as soon as I get back to
my design computer later on tonight. (approx 6pm CDT)
Thanks,
Don

#202 - this is the version where the panther is a little too big, not the others. Looking forward to seeing the new versions. Thanks!

Got it! Thanks...

On the new version can you include the panther breaking through the frame, please?

Sure thing, like I show on #28 #31 & #108 but with the
90 degree turned frame & new panther, correct?

Yes. We would still like some fine-tuning on the panther. Thank you for making the panther stronger, but it's now a little too aggressive. Can you split the difference?

Sure thing, do you feel the head/mouth are too aggressive?
I will tone it down on my next entries.
Thanks,
Don

The head/mouth area is the most aggressive. Thanks!

#452 #453 #454 - Here are my latest revisions...
Looking at your rankings, are you going away from the panther idea?
Please let me know your thoughts.
Thanks,
Don

Our feedback from the team today was to see some options other than the panther, but we still like how your design integrates the panther, window, film strip and idea "breaking through." Thanks so much for taking the time to make these additional revisions!

Thanks for letting me know & please let me know if you would like to see any variations.
Don

Sorry, I also wanted to ask, but forgot to...
Should the text read CHAPMAN with Filmed Entertainment secondary,
or should it read CHAPMAN FILMED with Entertainment secondary?
Thanks,
Don