Sort of. The color is right, but the extra line under the names is not needed. I mean take the tag line and place it underneath the names and the abstract circle. From left to right across the whole thing.
Yes. Can you also make "Lawyers Helping People" the same gray as the P.C.? And the. Move it below to underline from the left side of the circle to the right side of the names?
This one is great. Let's try this. Can you move the tag line to below to sort of underline the whole logo, then make the names a bit larger, and make the P.C. a bit smaller. Then for the letter colors can you match the color of the names to the midrange blue in the circle, and make the P.C. And the tag line match the midrange gray from the other side of the circle?
Really love this one. Can we play with a couple iterations?
Can you try:
1) same color for all the names
2) different locations for the names (maybe all in one line underneath; and stacked on top of each other to the right)
3) can you try making the points going to the center slightly shorter?
Maybe. This is getting pretty specific, but what if we change the bottom half of the two semi circles so that the right side finished under the left side, and the the S curve begins and ends between the two at the top and bottom, and the curve is softened and mostly traverses horizontally in the middle?
Now that we look closer it looks a bit too much like a propeller or the logo from the Thundercats cartoon. I like getting the S to be more abstract, but would like it to be still recognizable as a letter as opposed to what may be a propeller. Does that make sense?
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Can you try:
1) same color for all the names
2) different locations for the names (maybe all in one line underneath; and stacked on top of each other to the right)
3) can you try making the points going to the center slightly shorter?
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like this ?
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