Hi Husk not sure if you got my other comments about the design please let me know if you are planning on working on it. I like your wording the colors white and red also. But maybe we can do something with the pic, a round logo like starbucks where inside would be the pic i have in the brief (or better yet make a pic i upload into a nicer cartoonish pic) and underneath the wording that you have here on #3 .
Can you try to make it work ?