"CFO Services" can be taken right out and only have the "CFOServ.ca" and "Controllership and Financial Outsourcing Services" in the design. I find it too busy when all 3 elements are included. I would like to emphasize where people should go to find out about our services.
You are very close with the colours that I like....maybe slightly lighter blue in background and golder gold.
I like this.....could you please try this with a lighter background? Switch CFOSERV.ca with CFO SERViCES and somehow incorporate CFOServ.ca in the the design?
#10: Could you incorporate all three elements, i.e. CFO Services in big letters and "CFOServ.ca" and "Controllership and Financial Outsourcing Services" in smaller letters?