Center Mass Inc.Logo Design Contest

Once again, many thanks for Your kindness

Hello,
Feel free if You have any suggestions, revisions or anything, Please let me know. It will be my pleasure to work it.
Many thanks for Your kindness.

Hello,
Many thanks for feedback, its really helped me.
I want to submit several improvements... I need you to put my design as top5 rank for a while. Because only top5 rank can submit logo at this phase.
Once again, Many thanks and Really Apologize for this inconvience.

Would love to see this with some color -- red crosshairs and line below text.

A very clean and attractive design. Thank you